AEAS写作考试如何得高分,常见的雷区必须掌握

2020年03月24日 798人浏览

  作为澳大利亚中学的入门考试,AEAS考试的重要性就不用我多说了,关于AEAS独立写作来说,我们把握根底的词汇和写作办法就满足了?其实不然,我们重点仍是要重视自己写作时常遇到的雷区,这样不但能够防止失分,更是我们写作顺畅的一个办法,小编为大家整理了一些AEAS写作高分攻略的相关资讯,一起去看看吧。

  我们将审题的雷区大致归结为两个方面,一是微观层面踩到了大雷,即标题答复角度完全跑偏,非但“fail to address the task and the topic effectively”,更是“fail to address the task and the topic”;二是微观层面被散弹击中,即标题尽管没有了解错,但在论说过程中因为审题不细心或论说不严谨,亦或是论说过程中思路呈现偏差而带来的论说跑偏。

  首先我们先来看一下所谓微观层面的审题雷区,这样的审题过错往往是因为考生过错地了解考题的本意,而给出了可谓“驴唇不对马嘴”的答案,以TPO 25为例:

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

  Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.

  以下是一个学生给出的一个主体段:

  The main reason for my disagreement is that community service could help students gain knowledge and abilities that cannot be acquired in school. They can get acquainted with people in different age, with different backgrounds, and having different hobbies in helping neighborhoods. This means that students may have to learn how to express ideas, listen to others and cooperate with others, since much team work tends to be involved in the process of doing community service. Last month, I helped plant several trees in my community, and met a retired professor who is also a volunteer. He imparted me a great deal of knowledge about trees and planting. Because of his age, I also helped him finish nearly all labor work and he was more like a director who gave me suggestions and guidance. Evidently, if rejecting community service, I would definitely lose such a precious opportunity.

  假如单看上面这个阶段,不难看出,作者思路明晰、文字流通、论说有理有据,可是假如结合标题,其实也不难体会到,作者明晰的思路其实都用在了一个跑偏的方向上。标题问我们“是否赞同:现在的年轻人并没有花满足的时刻做社区服务”,上文中榜首句里的“disagree”告诉我们他不赞同,可是读完整个阶段,你是否发现,他不赞同的并不是标题,而是这样一个命题,即“现在的年轻人不应该花时刻来做社区服务”,因为整个阶段他讲的都是做社区服务的优点。

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  假如答复标题,很明显应该剖析的是年轻人为什么现已花了/并没有花满足的时刻做社区服务。所以剖析的角度也天然应该从年轻人出发,比如假如赞同,或许会说现在年轻人太忙了,或是服务意识下降了,或是现在的社会满足健全,不需要年轻人了;假如不赞同能够说现在的年轻人服务意识更强了,校园安排或公司安排的服务活动许多,或一些民间NGO等等都让现在的年轻人花了更多时刻在help communities上。

  这样,才是正确的解题思路,而依照上文的思路,就算文字再好,逻辑再连接,也只能承受成果不抱负的结果了。这种跑题我们能够称之为是一种微观的、彻头彻尾的跑题,像踩中了地雷,仍是那种一踩即爆的雷,基本结果只能是粉身碎骨。不过假如在考试之前加以满足的操练,这种严重的跑题大部分同学基本都能够防止,可是接下来这种微观的审题失误造成文章跑题就稍显麻烦了。

  我们来看一下以下这道标题:

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

  Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities.

  以下是一位学生的作文片段,最初段和榜首主体段(让步段):

  In almost every form of media, including television, newspapers and magazines, a great deal of attention is paid to the personal lives of celebrities. It seems that the public cannot get enough of this kind of news. However, I believe that what the media should do is to protect and respect the lives of public figures rather than giving too much exposure.

  Of course, close reports of super stars, especially news about their private lives and relationships, can satisfy fans’ curiosity and therefore promote the sales of fan magazines and other related products. Those celebrities can also achieve more affection and appear more on TV shows or entertainment news. However, the media should respect the privacy of every individual, including public figures. It is true that celebrities may have chosen to be in the public eye, but that does not give the public the right to know everything about them. Zhang Bozhi, a famous Chinese actress, has to change her dwelling places for three times to protect her sons due to the fanatical paparazzi. It is definitely understandable that a super star should have privacy and an ordinary life.

  相信你假如只看以上两个阶段或许并不会觉得有什么问题,可是假如我们结合起来标题,不免会发生一些犹疑,也便是许多学生常常有的一种感触,叫做“怪怪的”,这样写得话真的对吗?

  以上就是小编为大家整理的关于澳大利亚AEAS写作思路的全部内容。小编提醒大家在AEAS考试的备考过程中需要多做AEAS真题,总结一些比较常考的AEAS考试内容。关于AEAS考试你还有什么问题吗,联系我们获取更多AEAS考试资讯。祝大家都取得满意的AEAS成绩。


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